Tuesday, 7 November 2017

feedback from our first music draft video



Name
Alex, Alfie, Will
Music Video
                                      
Artist
Bathtub Shouting
Song
Sticks And Stones

Feedback

Make a decision regarding who will be your singer.

The car sequences don’t work.

Avoid static shots (specifically the sat down shot). Always have some movement (either the camera or the background). Consider foreground and background.

Lose the vodka bottle. It is unnecessary.

Try including 3 different outfits for the lead singer.

Consider title card at beginning and end.

Try to include more extras.

The city Centre setting will be excellent

Open few shots are composed and framed well.


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