improved pargraphs

We have used Steve E Carlsson’s theory as he states that a conventional performance music clip would be ‘when a video shows an artist mostly dancing and singing’ for our clip we have made sure that we have our performers singing throughout the video and the majority of it is them performing. Another theory that calsson staes is that “Sometimes the musical elements shape the moving pictures.” The way that we have tried to use this theory is by when on a particular beat we have tried to change the shot pretty much every time. this makes the video make more sense when changing shots as it doesn’t look like it is out of time, an example of were we do this is at 00:03 with our first change of shots.